September 24th, 2015, 11:40 pm

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The beginning of one story may be the midpoint of another.

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Shard, September 24th, 2015, 11:40 pm     Reply


I made the mistake of uploading the first page of this series while I was in the middle of a tournament known as the World Spriter's Tournament, and so that took up most of my time and I wasn't able to work on this at all. It was only after the tournament was finished that I was able to actually dedicate time to working on this, which took about a month and a half (the other month and a half was spent working on the WST) to get done.

I swear, one page will mark the point that my backgrounds will start to be coherent, make structural sense, and not be a bunch of colored blobs that I clearly stopped putting effort into about halfway through. (This page is not that page.) However, all things considered, I think I did pretty good (and it gives me more things to work on).

But anyway.

Today's page introduces our cast a little more formally. We have Két, our protagonist - and yes, for those of you who follow Aware, this is RP!Két - and her starter Pokemon, Haran the Turtwig. We have Lîz, the main rival, whose starter Pokemon is Simian the Chimchar, and Luka, the Professor's Assistant, whose starter Pokemon is Hero the Piplup. Lîz and Luka will be making more appearances as the story goes on, but by all ways and means Két is our main protagonist and the story will follow her and her misadventures in the Sinnoh region.

I'll see you guys on the next page, which hopefully won't take me three entire months to make!

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Snurple-the-Hedgehog, September 24th, 2015, 11:43 pm     Reply

It definitely not was a mistake. It totally happened on purpose.

But this page looks good, aye.

Also, if possible, can you at least add in some textures to the background? It felt a bit out of place.

AnXjak, September 24th, 2015, 11:55 pm     Reply

the suddden appearance of the meme bee B)

Kurona, September 25th, 2015, 5:22 am     Reply

Brave... not bad; not bad at all. Torterra's slow as shit anyway and this'll just make him hit harder.

Mopwop, September 25th, 2015, 3:58 pm     Reply

Wait... If this is RP!Ket... At what point does this story happen? After that battle with those two people trying to stop Jax? After all, this Ket here has no robotic arm yet... But then what is she doing here? Did those two people drag her over to Sinnoh with some weird world jumping powers? Also she's not a cat.. And what exactly is she doing here? What was the purpose? We're the two people that I just mentioned earlier trying to banish RP!Ket into another dimension so she wouldn't come back? But wait, Where's Jax? He did throw himself (Or part of himself, anyway.) into RP!Ket right after the battle, if I recall correctly. So why isn't RP!Ket trying to communicate to Jax right now? That's what I would do if I just woke up after my last memory being my arm ripped off. And if RP!Ket is getting her own comic, doesn't that make her another Comic!Ket?

The questions are real.

Shard, September 25th, 2015, 6:44 pm     Reply


...basically this happens right after the whole Taco Incident, and as noted in this page -> <- once Jax threw part of his mind into her mind she tore open a hole in dimensions and jumped through it, essentially throwing herself to a random location.

Other related questions shall be answered later, but she's human because Ket does that thing she does when she goes to different Worlds where she changes form to fit in better.

Mopwop, September 26th, 2015, 5:14 am     Reply

@Shard: Okay but.. Since you said in that comic that you had no idea where RP!Ket was after she jumped into the portal, how are you able to write this comic? You had to have someone spying on her while she was here...

Alright camera show yourself.

Shard, September 26th, 2015, 9:51 am     Reply

@Mopwop- To make a long story short - At the time that happened, this wasn't originally planned to be the story of what Ket was doing at that time. Also, Lostlorn isn't nearly as ... well, wall-breaky as Aware is. Ket can still see the wall (hence, able to understand Pokemon), but jumping around panels probably won't be happening.

Whip the Rabbit, September 26th, 2015, 10:39 am     Reply

Okay but
is Haran a seasonal turtwig.
Shard what do you think you're doing

Mopwop, September 27th, 2015, 1:35 pm     Reply



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